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Wednesday 5 September 2018

Did you ever????

Hello Bloggers,

Yesterday Mrs Butler came into our class to teach us how to write a poem.Thanks to Mrs Butler for bringing her dog after lunch.Mrs Butler challenged us to achieve using precise nouns and verbs in each stanza.

This is my poem:

Did you ever
go swimming early in the morning?

Teeth Chattering
Body shaking
Water splashing
Try it

Did you ever
go to Huka falls in Taupo?

Bridge shaking
Water bubbling
People screaming
I loathe it

Did you ever go fishing late at night?

Heart pumping
Waves crashing
Boat rocking
I love it

Did you ever brake your leg?

Scary thoughts coming
Heart pumping
everyone looking
I loathe it

Thanks for reading my poem hope you enjoied it.